Wednesday 20 June 2007

Just One More Thing

Can there be even one?” I hear you exasperatedly cry. To which the answer is yes, I very much fear there can! I really do apologise for this; it breaks the continuity of the story quite shockingly, I know. But it was always to have been an experiment, this re-telling of the story as a blog; and as such, it has taken on a momentum, and a capacity for fluctuation and change, that I confess I hadn’t foreseen myself at the outset.

My present dilemma concerns the discrepancy that has arisen around the characters (and the names) of Mr Porteous’s daughters. I had originally called them Julia and Anne - but those names no longer seemed quite the right ones, and so they have changed to become Imogen and Amy. Imogen is the elder, dark-eyed, and inclined to be confrontational in her relations with her father; Amy the younger, fairer, and more compliant.

I had already posted an instalment entitled Mr Porteous's Daughter, describing Anne, and the little handicrafts shop she had lately opened in the village. But I have now deleted that entry, and can only ask that those of you who have perhaps already read it, will try to delete it from your memories also?

It’s a great deal to ask I know. I had hoped in fact that the discrepancy might have been noticed, and brought to my attention by way of the Comment box. That it has not done so suggests that nobody has in fact noticed – so perhaps the adjustment won’t present quite so many difficulties as I had feared!

The present situation vis-a-vis the girls is therefore as I described it in the instalment of 15 June entitled “A Blog too far?”. And for those who haven’t read it (and perhaps have no intention of doing so!), the present recorded facts about the girls are these:

1) Imogen is 28, and took her degree at one of the London art colleges, specialising in textile management and care. Amy is 26, and took a degree in English at Bristol.

2) They have drifted about a good deal since graduating, and in fact spent many months in Australia with their mother, trying to decide whether they wanted to stay there or not. They have lately returned to England however, and are sharing a flat above a shop in Baker St (near to the Sherlock Holmes museum); with a view to taking a lease on the shop too, and opening it as an art and handicrafts shop.

3) This is an enterprise of which their father strongly disapproves.


This will I hope be the final alteration, and I apologise again for it.

13 comments:

aims said...

Well B - I had noticed the difference but didn't think anything of it as it followed my life so closely -

I majored in English and then went and opened a wool shop - selling wool and teaching hand and machine knitting -

So I guess I didn't think there was anything unusual about Anne's choice in life.

BTW - I like the name you have given her ... :)

and no - it isn't too much to make another correction...make all you want!

Anonymous said...

fine by me!

pluto said...

You haven't read 'The Transit of Venus' by Shirley Hazzard, have you? It's a wonderful novel. Imogen and Amy remind me a lot of the two sisters Caro and Grace. (I wondered if there were subconscious echoes at work on your imagination - and nothing wrong with that if so!)
It's fun reading this and other posts where you talk about how the characters change from your original vision of them.

lady macleod said...

Pashaw, I think it is fine, it really gives us a sense of growing with the story. You keep creating..

I Beatrice said...

Thanks Lady M - a word from you always gives me fresh courage!

I Beatrice said...

And Aims dear - what a good friend you are, not to have remarked on the oversight!

I Beatrice said...

PLuto, no I haven't read that particular book - and perhaps had better not do so until I've properly portrayed my own two girls?

I have enough angst already, in fearing people will think I've stolen my castle idea from Lady Macleod! (sorry Lady M, but you do know my worries on that score!)

I have just embarked on a huge and wonderful novel called "The Man without Qualities" (can't remember the author's name - somebody Austrian I think). It promises to be positively Proustian in range and scale - and style and subject matter seem to be just my cup of tea!

I often go to the prose of others for a pick-me-up, when my own grows tired, and flags.....

I Beatrice said...

Thanks as always, anonymous - you have become my most loyal follower!

(Odd that, don't you think - given all those years in which wild horses wouldn't have dragged you near a page of Mum's!)

Omega Mum said...

I'm not sure I'll like either of them....but I will try. Looking forward to Part 2.

Anonymous said...

Omega is right - they do sound pretty obnoxious - but I shall reserve judgement...

I Beatrice said...

I think you're being a bit hard on the poor girls, Omega and Mutley! After all, they may not resemble their father at all. Best reserve judgement till you've met them, don't you think?

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